Suggested change to Sully's last line
[QUOTE=Sully15; 1843920][list][*]There is a she, by UNC, Naomi is her brand.[*]A visit unpredictable, finale was unplanned.[/list][list][*]Sgt Steel, knows she's real, he's had this dream before.[*]Apparently she "tops his list", a quote you can't ignore.[/list][list][*]Barry9, says she's fine, but really not a fan.[*]I guess he's looking for a girl, more like Peter Pan.[/list][list][*]As for me, I must decree, while lying in the buff.[*]Her hands are strong and capable, she really knows her stuff.[/list][list][*]She has a sense of humor, your hands she may restrict.[*]Until she gives the go ahead, then touch you will inflict.[/list][list][*]There is a twist, do not resist, her secrets she'll deploy.[*]I'll have to leave you wondering, convinced you will enjoy.[/list][list][*]Don't get uptight, she may just bite, a nibble to include.[*]It's just a quick reaction, an impulse to the mood.[/list][list][*]So if your name is Harold, or Joshua or Gary,[*]Just like the rest, I must confess, your own mileage may vary.[/list]
[s]© Sully15. All rights reserved. (not really) [/s][/QUOTE]To make the flow of the words, and the tempo, sound better:
"Just like the rest, I must confess, your own TRUE mileage may vary."
BTW. I have previously reported on Naomi (thumbs up-definitely) , although I have not seen her in her new location.